The Earth Speaks to Me: Poetry Paintings

Introduction

What speaks to you in nature? If nature could speak to you in words, what would it say? What sounds can you hear in a natural, outdoor environment that are different from what you hear in an urban environment?

Think about nature being animate (alive or having life) and moving through us, around us, swirling about as we experience it with our senses. Use all your senses when you reflect on these environments: a park, a forest, the grasslands, the mountains, a river, lake, or ocean. Think about what that environment smells like, feels like, tastes like, looks like, and sounds like when you interact with it.

Skills and Concepts: Poetry, creative writing, word painting, personal reflection, appreciating nature.

Objective(s): Students will compose a word painting poem using descriptive writing and imagery; students will integrate the five senses into the poem as part of their reflection on a natural environment; students will learn a phrase in an Indigenous language.

Target grades: 7-9

Materials and resources

The poem “My Heart Soars” by Chief Dan George(to be read aloud following the activity).

An audio recording of R. Carlos Nakai – Selections from Earth Spirit

Optional

Indigenous Perspectives of the Earth

Like an expectant mother nourishes the fetus in the womb, Mother Earth takes care of us and provides all that we need to survive, such as water, air, fire, plant medicines, fruits, vegetables, animals, seeds, nuts, etc. as we live and grow in the earth’s “womb.”

We need to take care of our Mother Earth in return, and respect and preserve the gifts of natural resources and sustenance because, ultimately, the Earth is alive. It is animate and it responds to us. It speaks to us and the natural elements speak to us.

In the Cree language, “ni pîkis kwa tikwak” means “they speak to me.” (Pronounced as “nee-peek-skwaah-tee-kwuk”). Encourage your students to say this slowly and with meaning.

Activities: Poetry Study and Writing

Step 1. Listen to Chief Dan George’s poem “My Heart Soars.”

Step 2. Consider these questions with your students: How does Chief Dan George create a visual image of nature? What did you see, smell, feel, taste, or hear? What words or lines stand out?

Step 3. Let’s write poetry! First, choose your environment. Close your eyes and imagine you are standing alone right in the middle of that environment. What season is it? Visualize this as clearly as you can and use your imagination. What do you see, smell, hear, feel, and taste? (e.g., the softness of the air, the twinkling stars, the whispery wind, etc.). Brainstorm and write down everything you remember or imagine about your experience in that environment. (Feel free to use internet visual prompts of nature scenes if needed).

Step 4. Take a moment to think of how you could write a description for your reading or listening audience. Be very descriptive in how you want to create your words. Think of how the environment you’re imagining affects your five senses. Paint a visual picture in your writing. Be a “word painter.” Use colours, motion, emotions, etc. What sounds do you hear? What sensations do you feel? What smells are in the air? Can you incorporate taste into your description in any way?

Step 5. Create a bubble map with the chosen environment in the centre and line extensions containing the descriptive sense memories. Write many images of everything you experience standing there. What does the wind do when it picks up leaves and swirls up into your hair playfully? How does it feel to have the warmth of the sun on your skin or the crunch of the snow beneath your feet? What does the air smell like as you breathe it into your nose after it rains?

Step 6. As you prepare to write, listen to the flute music by Carlos Nakai. (Optional: Teachers may want to keep the music playing softly in the background as the students write.)

Step 7. Write a 12-line poem incorporating some of these descriptive images of your nature experience. End each of the four lines with “Ni pîkis kwa tikwak.” This resource contains a printable writing template for this activity.

Step 8. When completed, read your poem to yourself one final time. Reflect on your words through these questions when looking at your poem:

  • Do you feel you were able to capture the experience of nature?
  • Do you feel nature has spoken through you in your words?
  • Did listening to the music add to your thoughts and feelings about nature?
  • Would you feel comfortable sharing your poem to another person or to the class?

Note: there are no wrong answers to these questions. Everyone’s experience and creative process is unique.

Extension Activity

Step 1. What is a native flute (sometimes called a native American flute)? Have students do some research on this beautiful traditional instrument and share their findings with the class.

Step 2. Students may wish to make posters that include pictures, share some recordings (YouTube is a great source), describe how the native flute’s sound is made, or share some of the Indigenous legends about this instrument.